Reviews

Reviews

Reviews

for

Goodbye Danny

Andrew A: The author has created a compelling opening to their posting. It draws the reader into the story, setting the scene well. 

Vijaypnair: It is interesting, fast paced. My best wishes…

Rammy: I enjoyed the opening. Some of your descriptions were very good, like “besieged by clouds” “dropped my hands like bricks”…

Robbie: It begins with great excitement, energy and pace. You set up the forthcoming story brilliantly. 

SD-Lang: The simplicity of this is appealing. Girl dives in at the deep end. Everything hinges on the choices made by The MC, Sophia. I found her a surprising character.

Linguist69: A good opening, especially the first few pars – gets us right into the story. This is mostly pretty good stuff. The relationships in particular feel very realistic to me. Also I like the ‘voice’ of Sophia even down to the frequent use of ‘Girl’, which somehow manages not to be nauseating. 

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Sinking

Neil-A-Ran: The author’s fluid style, ‘Sinking’ is very easy to read. The narrative voice is strong. The character’s believable and likeable. Nice opening – draws the reader in with a little mystery and intrigue about Isabella’s past life. On the whole, a fine opening.

Oxforia: You do well to keep Isabella’s secret ‘love-bolt’ mysterious without overdoing it, which is an achievement in itself. I had to read on and was disappointed with the 7000 words came to an end…  

Eelly-98: Your chapters open nicely with an intriguing hook which sets up some great momentum and carries on throughout. You have some great lines; I really loved – “I didn’t think I had a cheek left after that. It heated up and melted all the way down my body to my feet.” And “Too much mixed spirits in fruit juice were bombing through my veins.” Your story oozes energy…

BruceBA: I have to say that you write well within your genre. It is very much alive, young and now, no pretensions and no embellishments. If you never mentioned Durban or South Africa I would have guessed – and that takes some skill. You’ve paced your work perfectly, and use of language done expertly (it’s good to hear people speak in an accent I know)… 

JuanDee: A very awesome book!